I really enjoyed this! You've used quite a unique and satisfying visual style, and I noticed quite a few little details in the art - the movement of the waves, the edge of the water, the dripping in the cave, etc. The scenery paints a great picture, and you've blended that with some lovely writing. There was something quite immersive about it all, and I even chuckled over some lines. Great work!
I'm really sorry that loadshedding interfered so much, but it's a great entry despite it!
This was also my first encounter with Bitsy. I noticed you named a few favourites in one of the comments belong so I'll definitely be checking those out too!