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This kit is off to a great start, it’s got a unique aesthetic that’s engaging and fun - if you fleshed it out into a comprehensive series I think it would rise up among the ranks with the best of em.

After initial impressions (weighing this and RPG STARTER together)

  • it could use an additional rock or two for forest ground objects
  • diagonal cliffs (optional but add a lot of additional use potential for a relatively small amount of content expansion)
  • negative space tiles (like drop into void)
  • waterfall
  • I’d personally like to see a tree based off the ground detail mushrooms
  • Cave entrance even if you aren’t planning on doing caves yet would be very useful
  • for climbing a ladder, rope or vine as well as hole in ground
  • double height cliff

I think those are the essentials - only offering as it was mentioned above I’m also very happy with the set in it’s current state

Some QoL additions that come to mind would be - Props, like barrels or crates - maybe a town/mission board and sign posts with directional shaped plaques - another tree variant or two - another house variant or two - interiors - fencing & palisade - grass - tent & campfire + props for player or bandit sites and that’s about what comes to mind.

Alot of great stuff already in there though I like the clouds alot theyre a nice touch, the palette is great too. Only thing I felt iffy about was the character scaling being too large in contrast to the world.

Oh! also my favorite part of every pack - the little rune stone circle - would love to see more of that occult runic / ruin stuff expanded on

Thanks for sharing it though hope we see more from this series!

I'm glad you liked it, thanks for the feedback and I apologize for the character, when I made this pack I was starting my journey in topdown, I hope this didn't make your experience bad!

not at all its been a great experience and the pack is superb, if this is your debut i’m very excited to see your work grow and what your future packs will have in store!