A few things I've noticed right at the start:
- MC is referred to as "$heshe" and "calen". (The former is clearly a bug, but the latter might be an unglossed term?)
- Selecting a different font, doesn't actually change the font. (Changing the size does work though.)
- Because the textbox has such high transparency, the patches of moonlight and reflection do not contrast sharply with the text.
- The text box is already about half the width of the screen. Add to that the one inch margins inside the box, and the text takes up barely one third of the screen. This despite there not being any side panels using the two-thirds empty real estate (a toggled bottom panel having been used instead).