Hey there. Thanks for getting back to me. I'm surprised you hadn't heard of F95. It is a pirate site but more of a community of AVN enthusiasts. It's a great place to get seen and promote your game. On the negative side, some members are ruthless in their comments about the games there. I recommend using the site if one of your goals is to make money from the game. It has an extensive database. It is set up for easy communication between members.
The other game sounds very interesting. I can see how it would be popular.
Regarding your game, I proofread it and think I can help. The dialogue is very good, but I see minor areas for improvement. I'm a native English speaker. I guess you could say editing, in a way. Not changing the intention of the dialogue.
I would recommend joining F95. Hope to talk soon. F95zone