I’m glad to see some music-related interpretations of the game. Great idea! The art style and sound design are great. I reviewed the comments and agreed with some of the feedback you’ve already received.
Personally, I would like the level design to be improved in this game later on. I had to find the information about the underpass at the beginning of the game here in the comments. It was impossible to identify just by looking at the scene. I also felt like there were a lot of dead ends where I needed to navigate to pick something up, just so I could backtrack to where I started.