There is a very long laundry list of things I wanted to add to this but didn't have time to before submission but I'll be working on improving it I think over the next couple of months.
I like the look if it. Even tho assets were from MP. As for wish list, I recommend you to make a proper house interior, like put some windows, pillars (on the walls). I think the mentioned asset packs have all those. Make or find a UI toon fonts. Good luck!