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Really liked the art in this game! It was definitely what drew me to check it out. Everyone's designs are endearing with how colourful and expressive they are. The interactions are really cute too. Excited for what you have in store! 

In terms of improvements, I think there are some pacing issues, especially with the first meeting between the player and Donovan being as short as it was. The AI art was a bit jarring to see too, since a lot of them were a bit warped and gnarly looking. Felt like it distracted from the scene a lot of the time. 

Other than that, keep up the good work man! Excited to see what you got in store! 

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Yeah im definitely gonna make make my own backgrounds in the future lol.

this my first vn so I just getting the basic the story down on paper. In the future I plan on giving this game a huge polish!

I'm still improving as an artist and as I a improve so will my VM! 😀

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That's really encouraging to hear! Thank you so much for being so receptive! Wishing the best with the development! 

By the way do you have any socials where you post your art? Would love to see more of it sometime! 

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Hmm not at the moment no 🤔

I post some rough ideas and sketches here for time to time though 😀 

Excited to see them as they come! Loving what you have for Maxwell so far!