This is really great, I like the power in this composition, it's very evocative and expressive. The only thing for me is the left hand's arpeggio from 1:13 to 2:09 does get a bit too much for me. I noticed that there were some variations to it, but I think more obvious variations in the arpeggio pattern and rhythm, and letting the arpeggio stop at certain points, would help this section become even more interesting!
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Thanks for your comment and listening! Hi! i listening here, Yeah! I actually wrote it on sheet music and some movements would actually get complicated if I were to play it, I also wanted to enjoy this piece at home lol I believe I composed it last year lol. I'll keep in mind what you said, maybe I'll rewrite some parts, do something different but keep what I already have, just to get these issues right is something to think about. Thanks! O/