Could you add pronoun changers to the beginning for both the main characters and others? Having they/them/their be a common pronoun confuses the hell out of me. Having some custom choices is always nice too. Even without that, your writing is really good and I like the different colors for different main branches in the story.
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I'm really glad you liked the story! And I'm sorry the neutral pronouns confuse you, I just wanted it to be enjoyed by most audiences so I default to they/them when referring to the main character. Some of the other characters are also nonbinary as well hence the usage of the same pronouns. I'll see what I can do to make things clearer in future updates, but thank you for your input!