hey, no crits :) "floor is made of floor" is a bit of a running joke in one of the other games i play.
its sad its taken so long, but it really is a good beginning, a very engaging story with just the right amount of perversion, which is why i care so much .. i need moar! ;) and yeah, that cliffhanger was a doozy.
this is where i make up some story about being a poor innocent child with cancer whose one wish for his short miserable life is to just see how it develops, and how the hell we're gonna get naomi on board for a harem
well ok, you asked for feedback, and i checked it out, you do you but i'm gonna have to pass on that one. definitely illegal where i am, regardless of text-based age settings or disclaimers, the laws are about character appearances here and are entirely subjective on the part of a judge. plus, the language one or two of the girls use make it very unambiguous they are prepubescent. definite jailbait material.
i'd rather not spend any time getting ass-raped in jail after the cops show up at my door. good luck to all the radiant fans out there.
at least taking advantage of the fully developed daughter of my gf and her school friends is not illegal here, so i'll wait for more Polarity. now, i better scrub my harddrive.
