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I love the game, the art is beautiful, and the story is interesting, and I am excited to play the future updates. However, I do have a few pieces of criticism that have been on my mind, and I mean all of this in good spirit!

- The characterization of the player is a bit strange, almost a bit too childlike and naive in a bit frustrating way.

- Some of the events in the game don't make a lot of sense (BUT it's also just likely there's context missing that will be provided in the next updates)

- I wish there was more good interaction with Bob because it genuinely feels like he doesn't like us despite the first day when we flirt, he flirts back with us and he even gives us free food. after the first day, it just seems like the relationship between the player and Bob deteriorates constantly.

- this is minimal, but some of the grammar is a bit off and tends to interrupt the flow of the game

Again, I'm not trying to bash the game or the team, I love the game so much and am excited to play the rest of the updates! I genuinely just wanted to give some critiques on things that might help improve the gameplay or things others may be thinking. 

Please keep up the good work, and thank you to the team of FC for putting so much hard work into this wonderful game I can't wait for the future updates!

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I was also wondering the same thing, like I thought we were good with Bob but then he acts kinda mean and ignorant towards us🥲

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Thank you so much for the critique! It's genuinely helpful.

We tried to portray bob in and outside of work to be different (southern work hospitably and all) But it's good to know how it's perceived. Sooner than later, we're planing to go through all of Bobs dialogue and smooth thing out and make things a bit more consistent, as well as fixing the grammar issues we missed while playtesting.