Great game(no idea why it came up in NSFW section tho)
Some suggestions:
1: Make the police counter way shorter, like 2-3 Minutes. 10 minutes is enough to finish the game twice, in 10 minutes it is not really a challenge
2: Remove the need to open the bedroom door(it is really tedious after the first 3 times)
3: Add more people, and make it so that you NEED to kill some people to be able to feasibly adjust other events to happen
4: Make anyone finding a dead body a event forcing every character to come to the murder site, and then they go back to their normal patterns