I agree the opening maps on this game are really good. Your writing is on point. The premise is wonderful and really nails the Christmas theme. I also have to agree with the pretty much what everyone else has already said. The font can be a little difficult to read at times. The last puzzle is a doozy. I unfortunately stopped playing during what I think is the last puzzle as I was going into the 25 minute mark. I think they were well thought out and inventive and executed well. I'm not sure I've seen the slippery floor tile puzzle done in that way before. Very cool. Personally though, I think your pacing was a little off in the story because you really don't get into the gameplay until way into the time limit which is a bummer because I wanted more time to spend on the puzzles and actually playing the game, which I finished later off camera. Overall good job, great game design, wonderful writing and execution.
Hi SlaughtyStudios! Thank you very much for commenting! I really appreciate the feedback received, I'm glad that at least some people have been able to enjoy the story and the gameplay... I focused quite a bit on the narrative, that's why this game can be a visual novel with puzzles. It was fun to participate in the Game Jam! Oh and I've seen your video on YouTube, it's weird to watch someone playing my game but it was a good experience how you suffered with the puzzles haha, thanks for sharing it!