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If I were to provide some constructive criticism the protagonist seems kind of a too much of a "outsider" trope of the generic loner self-depreciating protagonist who don't think much of themselves you see far too often in visual novels. I feel like he could either use a bit more fleshing out why they're so depreciating or think of themselves as unpopular or unworthy, or could grow a bit more of a spine or confidence.

Maybe its just cause I have too much sense of self-worth but it can be kind of grating trying to relate with cliche protagonists like these who have no real ambitions or go on a internal monologue of how mediocre they think they are, even though their situation is better than most people's these days (such as having friends, a supporting family <both monetary and emotionally>, a job/education, etc)

Any feedback is appreciated! So, thank you for taking the time to provide a constructive critique.

About the mc, don't worry, he doesn't see himself as unworthy, nor he thinks he's having a bad life at all. Actually, he points out that he's happy in the very first seconds of the game. He just ran to some bad situations, like everyone in their life. Yet, as story continues, he will develop even better. It's already something I had planned, I think you will enjoy to see what's to come. But I understand you think this way! It's just a silly excuse for really fun scenes that will come soon~

Thanks for playing the game!