Art style is adorable. Love it
BUT, if you're going to have a long exposition on your VN, it needs to be more interesting than a businessman awkwardly flirting in a coffee shop for unironically 100+ lines of dialogue. The game is good but the start made me not want to play it at first. It's so drawn out, but doesn't really attempt to make any shots towards actual sexual tension. It's flirtatiousness for the sake of the writer, not the story.
Also, the line where MC says (something along the lines of) "did my dick just twitch at a guy" feels really out of place and somewhat out of touch in a game that explicitly mentions trans women in the description, ESPECIALLY when we have no idea if the person behind the counter is a femboy or a trans woman. There's better ways to clarify this regardless of the answer. You're better off just writing something like "wow that was hot" instead of implying that the player who just downloaded a porn game about femboys didn't know they were attracted to femboys.
Overall, adorable art style, good game after the intro, but it has an intro that frankly desperately needs to be compressed and rewritten.