Well Done, especially for your second project. I enjoyed the vore aspects a lot. The writing was well done. The internals here really well done. I did like the POV style of the last project(FlirtyFox) but I am not complaining. I suppose it would be hard to implement a Pred to that style of game though, visually speaking.
Will future vore project contain similar size characters or have you thought of size play scenarios?
From the Comments I read here, the next project won't contain vore correct? Either way best of luck with that. Will that project be more story driven, in a one directionstyle or multiple chose style , or are you still experimenting and figuring out the build mechanics? I did see you mention something about the story branches here as well.
Sorry for the questions and these aren't requests by no means either just feed back and personal opinion. The 2 Stories are great so far and I look forward to future projects