I personally like the game and i really look forward to what will happen
I guess the biggest problem is that somethings seem meaningless and aren't explained in any way makimg them feel random and confusing, but that's only because the game isn't finished
Also some things seem to not fit, as if you tried to go into a certain direction but then decided differently in thw middle of it, i recommended that one day when you have more story and content and more importantly when you settled on the main plot and story that you rewrite some of the stuff
Of course i don't want to tell an artist how to make his art, i just try to give an idea to why people don't like the story