Damn, this update is such a huge improvement compared to the first demo you released.
The main character is not an annoying brat anymore.
The relationship between Feenyx and Bowers isn't rushed like last time.
Spelling and grammar also improved alot. I didn't notice any mistakes this time. Correct grammar makes it so much easier to focus on the content. Probably because I am not a native speaker myself.
The art was already really good in the first version, but I think the characters had a lot more expressions this round. I really liked that.
Even the menu and the loading screen looked a lot more professional.
I was really disappointed with the first demo, since the art looked so nice, but I am glad i gave this project another chance. Went from a 'meh' project to one of my favorites.
Keep up with the good work.
Take your time with your hiatus. Your personal life should always come first. I will eagerly await your next update. I generally wait a few updates before deciding to support a vn, but I am already thinking of joining your patreon.