"These are female activities in general" I'm a dude, so I get it can kinda suck sometimes when a lot of IF's are targeted towards women. It is what is right? But what is feminine about being a waiter? Like there are tons of waiters, and you could say it's a female dominated industry, but plenty of dudes are nurses too? It's just such a nothing point. And although yeah sleep overs are more feminine, plenty of dudes have sleep overs, I I had sleepovers when I was younger. Also, it'd be better to explain why the story was boring then just saying it was. It's not my favorite, but you offer bad criticism, y'know?