Hi,
- The animated font in the beginning is giving me a headache. Try to make it more static.
- The music choice is very good!
- The gameplay is just fun! I really liked the ideas and the challenges.
- The graphics are modest but fit to overall style of the game
- The main character moves bit too quick, sometimes it's purely matter of my dexterity.
As for the page: I find it fitting to the style of your game so I wouldn't worry too much about it.
Overall it was fun to play it. Very good work, especially for your first project.
If you find a minute or two, please share your thoughts about my project also. Thanks!