Well now. Sorry for focusing on only a small thing, but you’ve come up with a *really* cool language in this VN! Explaining why would be a spoiler, so I won’t go into details, but I think what you’ve done here is very nice. And if you’re revealing it the way I think you are … well, that’s downright clever. Good work!
Pity that, as the say, “the void will consume all”.
Otherwise, I think you’ve got something quite interesting going here, both in the setting and in the vibe. I have a few hunches about what might be going on – I had a sudden flash of inspiration on the balcony scene – but I don’t have enough information to be really sure yet. I look forward to playing future builds, and seeing if I’m thinking along the right lines!