I will share my experience and thoughts of the vn here, I hope that this helps you improve!

SPOILERS BELOW!!!

• I played on the English version.

• My route: Made a team with the two other guys and spared the kids’s life, got the good ending right away.

• Played other routes too, I was impressed that it is possible to finish the task without help. Is harder, yet is very uncommon to be able to do this in a vn.

• You managed to make a different ending for every possible outcome! nice!

• The worldbulding that you did here is pretty interesting (similar to Fallout, but with enough differences). This has potential for a sequel or a spin-off in the same setting.

• For the first vn, you did pretty well!