I don't know if this is already planned for the next update, but you could add a different kind of text box for when a character is thinking about something, like a gray thought cloud or have the thought be in brackets for example (wow that's a cute outfit). Just thought that'd make it easier to understand when the characters are thinking about something or actually talking to another character. another thing could be to have someone proofread the dialogue so that it makes more sense, I get what the characters are trying to say but it would be nice to have it be grammatically correct so that its super easy to understand. And I'm sorry if this isn't helpful but keep up the good work!
Don't worry, I love the feeback! The different color for "thinking" can be a great idea, I'll think about it!
About the proof reader, that's already done. There are several people helping me, so you will notice the difference in next version of the game. Even for all the past content, will be fixed!
Thanks for playing the game!