I want MORE. I don't care if it follows this story or not because the game concept and your writing skills are super good.
What I think is somewhat funny is that often passwords are less save stored in rl than in LSO. I have somewhere a txt for some...
So not only has it a good story and concept but it shows common human behaviors too and makes her realistic. Please keep that up with errors like opening E-Mail attachments without checking it or the user needs to look up E-Mails from other people in the "to" section of a chainmail.
(i had the article "Top 10 computer mistakes beginners make" from computerhope open)
Maybe it helps as reference for some concepts or ideas:
There is a somewhat similar game but in modern & funny called "The Pizza Situation" where one tries to influence others via chats and looks up stuff on the web. It is about 40% finished and last updated a few years ago.