I got to take a look at your document, thank you so much for your feedback, and I'm glad you enjoyed what the demo had to offer. I'll keep some of these suggestions in mind because some of them are worth noting. Thank you!
Hey I also wanted to give some feedback on the demo from itch.io. I divided it into 2 parts, tweaks and additions. I know that this is just a WIP build and that you already have plans to address some of the issues but thought I would give my opinion. I really enjoyed the demo and can’t wait to see where this game goes.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1eaGEYnUrZusI2KnTCJgoEdRU4icYjVlhFv-12PR5oFs/edit?usp=sharing