Wow wow wow! This was really nice and cute c: I loved the portrait art so much!!
With that said, there were a few typos, and the dialogue felt a bit stilted in some areas. If you're planning on continuing with this, would it be okay for me to offer my assistance as a script editor?
edit: also i woulda gladly eaten the maggots. i get that protag is not a bird but i woulda happily eaten the maggots as a show of appreciation anyway