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Love the overall story and the visuals are next level, but the dialogue ranges from OK at best to unbearable - typos, missing words, weird syntax, all of that really brings the experience down. In my opinion this should be your main focus going forward, as it's pretty much impossible for a game with poor english to get big. 

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Thanks. I will work on this.