This was fangtastic. I really enjoyed every bit of it! I would absolutely read about their Vampire Road-trip!!
I only noticed a few small typos; literally everything else was written so perfectly.
You open your eyes cautiously, looking around for anything or anyone that could be effecting you like this, but it’s silent.
If you had needed to breath, you’re sure it would feel suffocating, like gasping for air that’s just not enough.
You take their phone as they hand it to you, inputing the address to a nightclub two states over.
(effecting should be affecting, breath should be breathe, and in inputing should be inputting)
I love that Ko is so kind. Seriously great writing!!