I know this is a game made in a short period of time, made for a Game Jam, and not much else.
However, I would like it if you continue developing it. What I see here is the base for a very interesting story driven game. This, lets call it a "Demo", leaves some very interesting open questions, the player gets invested and wants to know what happened, and what is going to happen next.
I truly believe this game is the foundation for a very interesting project.