Well this was certainly a spicy femdom story introduction from start to finish. That's a genuine compliment. I did read the other comments, and whether you want to run with that concept is up to you, but it at least did deliver quite excellently there throughout.
But its rare for projects like these to have high-quality animations. While short in length, you can certainly see that there is a lot of latent talent here. If the tempo can be kept, this could be a future contender for one of the big visual novels on Itch.
P.S. this 1-day old VN project ended up being in the number #2 spot for that tag on the front page as of this moment. Certain niche tags shared by other projects are good way to get some hard-to-get visibility. It might also help clear up a lot of confusion about what this project will contain in the future--such as whether its going to be a sandbox, kinetic novel, or a choices matter novel, etc.