I really like the artstyle of this game, the story is really immersive and I enjoy every moment of it, though I would like to see more chapters.
If I were to give some feedback, I would say add music or anything...the eerie silence of just reading kinda makes me nervous. There's literally no sound whatsever just...silence. Also if you are looking for voice actors I would gladly sign myself up.
My favourite part has to be the twins :)