Loved the art direction, tons of narrative and story. I didn't read it all but it reminded me a lot like our own submission. The whole school/bully/aspect. I think your game is much more polished than our own....somewhere between level 2-3 it went all red and stay that way? Not sure if that was intended. I didn't like that, but overall it was pretty descent on all the things 4/5. Please check out our project if you have time!
Thanks