thank you so much aaaa!!!! i'm so happy that the blurry face thing is cool c: and while i don't play destiny (i'm Terrible at fps and i don't own any of the consoles it's on), i've read that article and i can see why you'd think of it!
it definitely gets some gears turning in my mind; Good Wordfeel is something i'm all about all the time, but it also gets me thinking a lot about the importance of tone especially in these very pithy descriptions? like, armor and weapons are such personal items that they tend to take on a more intimate tone than other things might. i think inventory items and possessions in general have the most capacity for that because the player kind of assimilates them into their experience much more than they do with ordinary environmental items.
okay it's like 4 am and i have way too many thoughts on this kind of thing so i'm cutting myself off here lol. but omg thank you again, i'm so glad it's looking good so far!!