I really like the concept, it's a good mix between platformer and 2D shooter gameplay. Unfortunately I didn't get far enough to see how the game lies to you but since it's used in the narrative (or so you say) I'm giving 4 stars on the theme for following it.
One thing that bothered me - things are WAY too bright. EVERYTHING just shines like crazy. I think that when you want to go for the sort of futuristic minimalist style with shiny objects, less is more. Maybe tone it down for the terrain and platforms at least.
Otherwise everything felt smooth and the audio was simple but sufficient. Good entry !
If you like RTS games I'm also looking for criticism, and a rating maybe.