if that was your goal, you completed it perfectly. and to end on a lighter note, i would absolutely without hesitation go with miss ha-ha
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and when the main character said it looked like her childhood bedroom in the second job i was REALLY suspicious that miss was going to end up being like, her older sister or her mom and taken revenge on the people who took her or something and the main character forgot her past. It couldve been a way that the story was taken but i love the way the story was.