If i can give some constructive feedback its easy to get lost from one scene to the next. Maybe put in a transition page something along the lines of the next day or a few hours later along with a location?
Really? You have difficulty understanding that time passes as the story unfolds?
Are you sure that you're old enough to be visiting this page, playing this game, or commenting online?
There is nothing worse than:
MC: I think I will go outside
BLACK SCREEN: A few minutes later
MC: I'm now outside
To begin with, those transitions are extra work for the dev, and unnecessary for anybody with the slightest understanding of the concept of time.
The only exception would be if the characters are in the same location, wearing the same clothes, standing in the same pose, but from one text box to the VERY next moves time forward by more than 30 minutes.
And if that is the case, I would suggest that the game would be unplayable for more reasons than that.
1) this was constructive feedback for the dev. You're not the dev so your response is unneeded.
2)your immature reaction is more an identifier to your age not mine. Are you old enough to be here?
3) there's several points in the gameplay where time frames obviously jump hours or days but no given time frame is given so you have no idea the pacing of the game or how fast your answers are impacting things.
4) i didn't say the game was unplayable. Please be sure to actually read a comment before responding. Your lack of literary understanding also shows you're not old enough to be here.
Have a nice day :)