Hello! Thanks for playing and for giving such a detailed comment! Most of the text was the text of Through the Looking Glass, so feel free to read at your leisure if you haven't read the book! I didn't expect any players to read it in this jam game.
I spent a fair amount of time on the music, trying to make a multi-part composition that blended well as players discovered more chapters. When I finally decided to render the music, I saw it was only two minutes long and I knew that wasn't enough. I did want to make it more dynamic, gaining parts of the music with each new chapter found, but I don't have time or the musical chops to pull that off in 48 hours. As it stands, the flute comes in as you gain more chapters and the piano fades out a little (but is always present). I use jams as an excuse to practice making music, so I try to not use public domain music in these short ones. I had been wanting to up a page turn/pickup sound, but I forgot along the way, I think!
I'm planning on turning this into a larger game, and I'm certainly going to take your feedback into account :)