Hey! Honest reviews are very welcome.
https://itsnotsimon.itch.io/beyond-eden
Honest review
I loved the narration and style. I would suggest only one thing - you need to be more consistent with your interaction systems. For example in the start you can skip text with space but then you need to click continue. Overall great game.
It would be cool if you check out my game too
https://itch.io/jam/cgj/rate/476770