Really cool piece, and nice guitar playing! Although I enjoy the vibe, I didn't fully get the danger and tension of an oncoming hurricane or storm. I really like what you do between 0:17 - 0:24, where a melody kind of 'pops out' of the rest of the music, I think mixing in something like that but with highlighted dissonance might be a cool way to introduce more of the storm's feeling of danger and tension into your music.