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This game obviously had a lot of time and effort put into it, and I ended up spending an hour trying to beat this game, so you get the full wall of text. You're welcome, but also, I'm sorry.

I try really hard to not review a game until I've beaten it but I'm sorry, the 'rye' hint is too vague. First I thought maybe it was talking about a flour plant explosion since those can happen, but after 5-10 minutes of not finding anything particularly notable I stumbled upon 'killer in the rye', which is a reference to ergotism, or St. Anthony's fire. This I thought must be it, because it links the given hint, death by rye, to something with 'fire' in the name, like how you get threatened with fire in that room. However, I could not determine any particular year that referenced St. Anthony's fire.

  • 0857 is potentially the first ever reference to ergotism
  • 0994 is when thousands of people in France died of it
  • The order of hospitallers of St Anthony was established in 1100, and it's from here that we get the connection to the affliction being called St. Anthony's Fire
  • There was an outbreak in Paris in 1129
  • There were particularly notable outbreaks during The Great Famine, 1315-1317
  • in 1596 a german physician, Wendelin Thelius, connected the ergot fungus to rye
  • in 1582, a german physician, Adam Loncier, uses ergot to help with pregnant women's labor
  • the blight was called cockspur, and a connection between ergotized rye and bread poisoning was stated in a letter to the French royal academy of sciences in 1676
  • The affliction was first called 'ergotism' in 1853

Just to try and cover my bases, I literally checked every value from 1800 to 1927, then all the values from 1100 to 1200, then all the values from 1100 to 1200. Nothing has worked, so either I chased down the wrong rabbit hole or there's something year I missed.

What made this worse is that, after every 5th attempt or so on that room, the floor will no longer function: After a death, you'll reload in the room but then fall into the abyss. There's no resetting manually to a checkpoint or anything, the only this that can be done is re-opening the game.

This results in re-watching the intro, which after 5 times I can tell you is maybe just a tad too long. I'm not sure why the pauses between captioned bits between the detective and the doctor are quite so long, I feel like they could have been cut to make that ordeal much more manageable.

Since we're here as developers, I guess I'll give my two cents on puzzle designs like this. First a prelude: I've heard interesting takes on accessibility in games specifically around language: Usually we consider a game accessible if it's translated into multiple languages, but another take I saw was the idea of removing language altogether. If you didn't have language to get across an idea, how else would you convey that instruction to the player? Of course not every game can obtain something like this, and it's not like such games are inherently better, but it prompts an interesting consideration, a framing or a lens to approach one's game from an accessibility perspective.

With that said, I feel like using riddle that are very UK centric is going in the opposite direction, as far as accessibility goes (this in relation to the whitechapel murders and, I can only hope to assume (see challenges above) the st anthony's fire riddle). In this case it's not a language barrier, but a cultural one. There's nothing wrong with making a less accessible game--I have enjoyed Bennet Foddy's Getting Over It and part of the ethos of that game is that it's excessively brutal and difficult and unforgiving. But, whereas in that game that sort of difficulty is a core part of the experience, I'm not sure what exactly this game is buying from being similarly obscure. Fond feelings from other fellow UK people, I suppose, but I wonder how valuable that sort of thing really is for a game, I wouldn't be able to judge.

Getting more to the point, my only real critique isn't anything with the UK-ness of the game, but with the conceit of the riddles in the first place. You've said in replies and on the game page (and the villain taunts you about it in game) that the intent is to get the player to use resources outside of the game, chatGPT or google or something, to help find the answers, and I'm not sure why that was a priority or what that adds to the game. Or put another way, I'm not sure what the core message of the game is, because the creative decisions go all over the place.

Like, one angle on this is that the character we play as is some test subject: A mad scientist wants to see what it's like when someone records their perspective from literally their point of view, from within their skull. The villain alludes maybe to seeing from someone else's perspective, so maybe the idea is also that video to be recorded isn't meant for the main character to review, but for someone else to view. So the theme is about perspective: how we value our own, the extent to how much we might value it, and what it might be like to literally view someone else's perspective. Also is allows for the creepy imagery of having a camera grafted into one's head, very on point.

But then the villain asks you to solve riddles. I think the riddles are less the point and maybe, it's about recording yourself struggling and panicking? So that whoever watches the recording gets to relive the panic? but then that could be done in so many ways. Being forced to look someone in the eye as you sacrifice them to save yourself, that's something that could have impact and leans more into the Saw inspiration. Having to bodily harm yourself, and having that recorded from your perspective, would add some amount of terror for whoever is watching--I feel like Resident Evil 7 and Village did that pretty good, with Ethan having to heal himself from some horiffic injuries. These are just some other ideas--I recognize that these are probably harder to implement than some voice lines and keypad puzzles, so I'm not even that bothered by these puzzles existing as they are. But if this game is something that's going to see some continued development, and it feels like it very well might (and that effort would be justified, there's lots of good stuff here), I feel like the mechanical gameplay conceit of answering riddles truly should be reconsidered, or at least adjusted.

I'm sorry I couldn't complete your game. I do like the parts I liked about it very much--the voicework, the presentation, these are clearly very well done.

I'm quite touched by the fact you played as much as you did and took the time to write all this, so I'll do my best to address what I can.

The intro sequence you can press space to skip, I intended to put a visual que for that, but time got the better of me.

The UK centricity is only on the two rooms, if you had selected the other path you would have had two different rooms with different riddles, one of which is puzzle based and the other being American based.

The fire room is referencing the great fire of London, it was started in a bakery hence the rye reference, so you were leading to the right track. I did have another clue for that room but again time was against me .

As for the lore, the concept is that you are actually the detective from the first Cutscene viewing the tape pulled from the victim. While you play as the victim you can find some lore based pickups (I didn't get to put as much as I'd have liked) that hint towards the killer having a likening to "augmented surgery". The character of the killer is meant to establish his insanity while also showing himself to believe he is of high intellect and sets up these puzzle rooms to 1. Test his patients and 2. Record the results of his experiments. I can't delve too far into the lore as this is a smaller piece to what I intend to be a much larger game.

The idea of having the player use web search to find answers is simply an extra layer of meta mechanics that I wanted to play with. Some people enjoy trivia and I wanted to use a mechanic that wasn't used much and would actively get the player thinking in a different way than the usual physical game puzzles.

I chose riddles that were based on famous events, concepts or serial killers as I figured they would be the most known worldwide.

I wasn't aware of the multiple respawn floor glitch, though I think I have a good idea why that might happen so I will look into that for post jam fixes along with a laundry list of improvements and changes thanks to critiques like this.

Thankyou for playing and I'm glad you enjoyed what you did get to play, I'll take into consideration these points.

PS, I'm Australian not English 🙂