A fun little visual novel with a highly unexpected twist, left me eager to know what happens next!
The art is lovely, and the girls are so very cute! Wylo is such a cutie in particular. I wish all the existing art was finalized, but even the ones that didn't have color looked great. Not sure if it's a widespread or isolated issue but often times when sprites and art changed or popped into view it was pixelated for a moment before displaying correctly, but it wasn't too distracting. A few typos here and there which is not the biggest deal.
It was quite a fun story do far, and the part where Wylo gives out her reward is so cute! The aesthetic is really cool and I love the concept of it all happening inside an airship. Very nice submission, I loved it!