Two minutes before the deadlines; you sure like living on the edge ;-). The art was very beautiful, but the flashing screens were a bit much. I noticed that the dialogbox uses a different font. Also, in the second level it is possible to get to the end without falling down and getting the big reveal. If you then jump off the level, you just endlessly keep falling down. Lastly, I found the glitchy blinking platformers to be quite difficult and it would be nice if you could do next dialog with the spacebar as well.
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Thanks for the feedback :) I am aware that you can do that in the second level because I forgot to turn off collider for the platform. I am sorry that you thought the flashing screens were too much, it is an important feature for the story so I wanted it to be powerful. For the dialog - you don't have to click, you can use Ctrl (as written in Controls). Thank you a lot for playing though, the game will be updated with more levels, fonts and your feedback will help me consider other changes as well :)