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Visual Novels that get me genuinely hooked are rare, and this is certainly one of them! The characters have tons of personality and Morgan's cold and wild sides keep the story unpredictable and very fun!

I really love the way the game is set up with the construction sections followed by dates with different results based on your loadout. This is really clever, and gives a ton of replayability and strategy to the visual novel medium. It's also totally in-universe, and is a key part of the world building! The menu design for this is also great, as are the very flavorful and handy diagnostics running on the left of the screen. Starting with mismatched parts  seems too strong compared to the other options. Deeper impact from successful or failed checks would be exciting to see as the game is expanded.

Character art is fantastic, it matches the personalities perfectly with a fitting range of expressions. A variation for when things get steamy and some more part swapping versions would be incredible to see if you plan to continue development. The backgrounds are simple but good, perhaps they could benefit from some simple contrast adjustments and subtle blur, so as not have parts that are significantly lighter than the characters or darker than the outlines. Something closer to the one in the Bambi's bedroom.

The music and sound effects that are in the game are absolutely great, I just wish there were more tracks for the impactful scenes.

Really wonderful work! I would like to revisit this game someday if it's expanded, I love the way it plays, the setting, and especially the entire cast!