Thanks for reviewing.
Regarding the theme, there was meant to be more of an implication of the railway being in decline, but the chapter was rushed out the door and I only verified that the chapter could be finished. The ending dialogue is also extremely short due to that.
The village error is especially bad, and I'll probably fix that and other noted issues in a v1.1 in the future (not here so as to not influence the judging process). The guys by the wall are just meant to guard the wall to make it a bit harder to reach the station area.
Overall, I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for playing.