Thanks for your kind words and feedback!
I definitely aimed for "busy and rushed" rather than "uncaring", so I appreciate you making the distinction.
You should take away from it what you want, but my intent with the 3rd night was the feeling of a decaying temple requiring arcane incomprehensible rituals to maintain.
I like your take on the final sequence as well. My particular variety of health problems is autoimmune, so the issue of how both you see yourself and how your body sees itself are relevant.