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You might ask a native speaker to give it a pass. Machine translation is very good, but it's just off enough to not sound natural. very distracting and immersion breaking. Same with your other games.

ネイティブスピーカーにパスしてもらうとよいでしょう。機械翻訳は非常に優れていますが、不自然なため自然に聞こえません。非常に気を散らし、没入感を壊します。他のゲームも同様です。

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Thank you for your honest opinion about the text of the game.

Your opinion helps me a lot.

I have fixed the text of the game by myself a little after machine translation, but this task was very difficult.

I will wait and consider the budget and the opportunity to obtain a connection with a translator.

Lastly, once again, thanks for the feedback!

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You're welcome! And I am sure you could find competent volunteers who would be willing to give it a once-over for free.