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Okay, people need to learn the difference between "bob" and "bop". People don't "bop their head up and down". They BOB their head. If you're frustrated maybe you BOP someone on the head. This game has some of the best writing I've seen in similar games but "bop" threw me. Also, you don't wake up ON a place, you wake up IN it. "Woke up IN the ward" for example. There's a lot of editing that needs to be done imo.


Now I'm wondering why the tavern lady Shay has three lips.

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We have someone doing proof-reading and editing (for free), ideally, we'd like to be able to afford a professional editor/proofreader to assist, but right now, it's out of reach with our current budget unfortunately. Though hopefully that will change as we continue to grow.