bout 10 mins in and im likin it so far! the writing sometimes doesnt make sense, such as kotone complaining about her school makin her wear a skirt cuz shes cold, even tho she has obviously shortened her skirt to the point that its a bit obscene lmao XD and why did she so vehemently insist on leaving hibikis house right after she woke up and ate, just to be lonely and even say herself she should have stayed when she got home? kind of negligable to point out, its jus that it made no sense at all lol. but obviously that stuff is quite minor, while some doesnt make sense i find most of the writing cue, charming, and well done. i like the character art and the music is a lil different than most VNs, which is a plus in my book! ill def be finishing it tomorrow, i hope those terrible girls get whats comin to em! or at least feel some remorse lol, i mean how do u just beat agirl half to death like that?? lol jus terrible... thx so much for makin it!
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Hey there! Thank you so much for the feedback! The skirt bit I agree is a laughing matter haha. Blame the artist for liking short skirts LOOL!! As for your second point, it was to showcase that Kotone is a really guarded person, especially when it comes to strangers. She JUST met Hibiki and she has no idea who she is, except that Hibiki helped her. Since Hibiki was a stranger, Kotone wanted nothing to do with her and recluse back to her usual lonely self. She then realizes she should have stayed at Hibiki's house (as a thought only, I don't recall her madly regretting she should have stayed) because she realizes the company Hibiki had given her was a lot warmer, in contrast to the cold empty house she went home to.
Hope that explained a bit for that part! :) Thank you once again though for even leaving a comment and giving feedback + compliments! We hope you enjoy the rest of the VN! <3