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Hi, the game is really cool and it is really impressive for you first game. Since it is your first game I will tell some things that you could have in mind to improve: transitions, music, audio effects, other animations than the own player, chose of colour, particle effects and others.  The art is really interesting and I really liked it, you should continue making that!

Things that you could improve specifically on this game: the camera movement on the Y is no smooth and doesnt feel good, other thing you could do is organise the green dots in a symmetrical way, it feels more professional and it looks better.

Good job making your first game ! I gave a big comment because I really want you to improve and I really wanted someone to tell me when I started. Continue with your journey ! Good luck !

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Thank you a really really lot for your feedback, it is a lot, but exactly what I need to improve on!! It is awesome that you liked the art style, it is something that just came out of no where, thank you very much for your comment.

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if you want some other help or just have a chat if you are blocked any time my discord is Bruno3547#4690, you can add me and I can help you a little bit :)