Hello! Welcome to Feedback Quest 6! My name's Hythrain, and I'm one of the hosts and streamers for this event! This feedback is being written live on my stream.
This was a neat concept for a game. This would make a fantastic mini-game in a larger game. I think the only issues I had was the way the monitors kept moving and floating away, and the area where I could put them felt very packed in due to the size of everything. Maybe something where monitors that aren't in the centre will shrink a bit instead of going off screen as much as they do and then making it that the monitors just bob up and down in spot instead of floating as far away as they do.
I'd also say that if you happen to fall out of one monitor, if another is underneath it you should be able to land on it and save yourself. Might seem a bit meta, but I feel like that's part of this game's design so it would fit.